Barry SCHWARTZ (Barijo ŜVARC) (chemoelectric) wrote,
Barry SCHWARTZ (Barijo ŜVARC)
chemoelectric

I grow weary easily when reading

http://www.livejournal.com/users/chemoelectric/friends/#entry_22907

I was reading sspaper.pdf pointed to at the (syndicated offsite)
article you can read at the above URL. But I quickly wearied. I think
in part this is due to medical conditions, most likely involving
fibromyalgia. However, there is also this. I got the impression that
if I had written the article it might have been reduced to five or ten
pages, perhaps 15, but in any case fewer pages, after careful work.

Seek brevity, and this will help you in your life. Gently resist the
urge to 'improve' your statements by expansion, and instead improve
them by simplification, where possible.

Now I shall go read some of Robinsono Kruso.
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